COMPAREIT ABOUT CELEBRATY OF CHRISMAS IN NHORT IRLAND AND COLOMBIA
IN NHORT IRLAND THE PEOPLE TO PUT A COAT FOR THE GIFTS AND NOT LIKE IN COLOMBIA
NORTH IRELAND PEOPLE USUALLY SING CHRISTMAS SONGS ON CITY PARKS,
. COLOMBIAN PEOPLE LIKES TO GET DRUNK UNTIL THE SUNNY DAY AND
NORTH IRELAND PEOPLE PREFFER TO DRINK SOMETING WITHOUT GETTING DRUNK.
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alexander ibañez astaiza
antonio nariño, Colombia
alexander
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You should choice aproppiate words in some sentences and You going to learn more vocabulary.
HELLO I THINK YOU SHOULD CORRECT NEXT SENTENCES:
NORTH IRLAND
NOT LIKE IN COLOMBIA
SOMETING
WITHOUT GETTING DRUNK
Hello Alexander...
You should correct some typing mistakes and grammar too.
You shouldn`t think in spanish. You have to try to think in english.
Bye.
hello Alex , I think you should change the preposition OF in the sentense "Celebrate Of cristhmas in North Irland an Colombia",
I think the correct pr´position is Between
Hi, you have to pay attention to right structures.
I found several mistakes like this:
- CHRISMAS
- THE PEOPLE TO PUT A COAT
- SOMETING
- COMPAREIT ABOUT CELEBRATY
HELLO!!!
I Think about the vocabulary and structure for example:
INCORRECT : CHRISMAS
CORRECT: CHRISTMAS
IN NHORT IRLAND THE PEOPLE TO PUT A COAT FOR THE GIFTS AND NOT LIKE IN COLOMBIA
Pay attention to spelling of most words.